Blue Haze

I am becoming a fan of your work. I love your subject matter and the raw emotion that you capture in your poetry. Perhaps this could in part be because ...

WOW! What enormous insight! You have really captured the emotion in this piece. Very powerful stuff. Outstanding!

I know that my opinion is going to conflict with some others, however you state that your rewrite hasn't got the feel or the mood that you wanted. Trust your ...

This is the second installment of my story about Jess. Although I have spent hours on this peice I am still struggling to put it together properly. Any advice would ...

Hi Dammerung Thanks for your post. I did have trouble coming up with a title for this. My plan was to eventually have a whole lot of different stories about ...

Granted! You use it to travel back in time and to your great delight it works! Upon exiting the time machine you marvel at the dinosaurs all around you. Unfortunately ...

Wow! I take my hat off to you. Not only have you helped me heaps but more importantly you have done it in a gentle and kind manner. THANK YOU! ...

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Granted! But you are asleep when it lands, and in the meantime a band of robbers collects the whole lot from your doorstep. While they're at it they decide to ...

Thank you kindly for your comments Jess. I look forward to your critique as it has been a little while now since I was last at school, and one does ...

"and I am wont to agree" I dont understand this bit. In fact I dont really understand any of it although it appears to be well written. I will have ...

I wasn't quite sure where to put this post. You see this story is based very closely on true events, however because it is written in the third person, it ...

Wow, this really touched me, my curiosity gets the better of me here and I am left to wonder what it is that happened exactly. Still putting that aside, I ...

Fantastic writing, easy to read, something that I would pay for. I am really enjoying this, however I am forever hopeful that there is more going on here than just ...

The same, [or similar], colours to a zebra, is it not? How would you describe nothingness?